Just a Kiss - Comments

  • samlo

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    I loved this! You already know that I love your writting so, so much. But this is my team you wrote about, so I love it even more.

    You threw me off with your name change though. And it was weird to read "Martin" instead of "Marty." No one calls him "Martin." But I still loved it regardless.

    This would be exactly how I picture Heddy the first time he meets a pretty girl. He is just so shy, but at the same time a total jokester.

    Leave it to Bugsy to shout ot that it was all Stammer's fault. I always knew he was a little snot. ;)
    May 14th, 2012 at 11:04am