I've never cried so hard in my entire life while reading a fanfic. The last few paragraphs were a blur as tears were pooling in my eyes. It's beautifully heartbreaking, I can't stop sobbing...
This is such a lovely piece of work (the layout's beautiful as well). I need to enlighten myself with some 1D humour right now. In depressed mode now...
UGH NO WHY WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS. TOO TRAGIC, TOO MUCH SADNESS FOR MY SANITY. it's like... the only thing Louis was holding on for was the opportunity to touch Harry again, and when it happened- BOOM. NO FUCK NO I'M IN DENIAL AGIAIN, THIS IS NOT HOW IT ENDS AND MY HEART ISN'T BREAKING IN DOZEN OF PIECES, NOPE.
really, though. it was fantastic (except for a typo in the 12th paragraph- i think you meant "everything" and it came out as "everutjomg", whatever that means) and i'll probably read this again when i want a big bowl of feels.
Omfg so I know how you haven't posted anything yet but I just wanted to let you know that I subscribed to this because it sounds so beautiful and akjsflsrkhgkslbhsnbth okay bye.