Wow, this was just amazing. It's the most saddest and touching thing I have read yet. You missed a couple things here and there. Some of the sentences need to be adjusted because they didn't flow well with the story or didn't make sense.
Aside that, this really took my breath away. I can't believe you do not have any comments on here yet. Bravo, this was amazing to read and it basically just stopped my heart for a millisecond when the shot of the gun erupted through the air and woke everyone up
Aside that, this really took my breath away. I can't believe you do not have any comments on here yet. Bravo, this was amazing to read and it basically just stopped my heart for a millisecond when the shot of the gun erupted through the air and woke everyone up