Hey, I really like this. But you need to work on your grammar. Paragraphs should be seperated by a space. Look at some other stories for examples or something. Also, dialogue should start a new line.
I love the plot of this story and all, it's great. And I can relate to it. It's kind of funny, I'm trans(Female to Neutrose) and I go by Dakota. :p
Hi! I haven't actually started reading this yet, but I'm very much interested. I was just wondering if you planned on continuing the story, because I hate getting emotionally attached and then have the story not ever get finished.
I love the plot of this story and all, it's great. And I can relate to it. It's kind of funny, I'm trans(Female to Neutrose) and I go by Dakota. :p