Does It Hurt When You Breathe Too? - Comments

I'm not gonna deny it's a good ending thought. It really isn't. I just wish it was happier. Maybe you could just do an alternative ending?

..... I'm literally sobbing right now. Like.. no. that can't be the end can it? Are you punking us? You must be. Maybe it has to do with the fact that everything else in my life is shitty so I'm easily sensitive? But this ending... I've never cried so hard over a story before.

the end kills me. i dont like knowing what happens. epilogue pleaseeeeeee!! just read the full story and i dont feel bad for ronnie at all. he made these decisions. he broke a perfectly good girl.

O.O.........what?! Why?!
Poor Ronnie! He should've taken Frankie with him!
Sequel?!

Wait what?! No! GAH THIS ENDING IS KILLING ME!!!!!! I loved this story and now I'll never know. You know what? In my head, they got back together and lived happily ever after lol

Ahhh! I hope you write a sequel!

It's been long. I need you. :'(

Hi, I’m here on comment swap!

First off I want to say that I think it’s a bit silly asking for a comment on a sequel to another story. Personally I think you should be asking for comments on the first one before you wrote the sequel.

Okay, so I’m not the biggest fan of Ronnie Radkie stories and honestly your writing is good, barely any spelling mistakes so that’s good. The only thing that I don’t like about a lot of people sequels is that there is barely any reference to the story beforehand.

Like I said, I’m not really a fan but keep up the good work I guess.

What?! Noooo! They were happy!!! Who's this man?! And why is he ruining happy time?!

WHO IS DAT MAN?!? Ahh! UPDATE SOON I BEG OF YOU

NOOOOOOOOO!!!! DAMN DAMN DAMN DAMN!!! LET THEM BE HAPPY!!

love it !!

NOOO GO AWAY JEWELS NO ONE LIKES UOU! She should 'tragically' die in a car accident.

Ronnie is better with Aishlyn but she's being cold towards him and I understand that because he hurt so many times and overall this was a nice update :)

I don't believe Noelle is his kid like Frankie is. I don't like Jewels either. NOW GET BACK WITH AISHLYN AND MAKE EVERYTHING RIGHT RONNIE!

I came from the comment swap.

This story isn't really my cup of tea, so I'm sure if I were interested I would love it! I love that you have correct spelling and grammar and get straight down to the point!

Well done!

Noooo he can't move back in with Jewels, I thought he was just gonna visit Noelle.
I still think its so cute when he spends time with Frankie Jay :D

I'm confused...Is Ronnie moving back in with Jewels? Or is he just going to visit?

AWWW he knows Ronnie is his daddy. Why do I have a feeling Noelle isn't Ronnie's. Update soon :)

AHHH new Mibba is KILLING ME! BUUUUUT! UPDATE NOW OR I MAY HAE TO MURDER YOU MISSY! Love you! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!