On The Line - Comments

You should continue this story !! It's really good I know you said that it was finish but please continue it :)

I loved this, it was lots of fun to read :)

I really, really enjoyed this.

It fit the prompt perfectly and your characters were very developed, which is hard to do with a shorter story. Also, as plenty of other people have said, the story being about Karlsson definitely helped! I think you hit the nail right on the head when it came to portraying him.

Overall, like I said, I really enjoyed reading this. The ending was great—a little bit of the expected, a little of the unexpected. Good luck and thank you for joining (and actually sending in an entry)!

Love this story!!!! I'm so happy its about Erik Karlsson, there isn't alot of stories about him and he's one of my favourite players, so thank you!!!!! :)

I love this and I'm sad there is only going to be one chapter left. but uh love it:)

Ahhh! Continue it! I love it (:

I love this! please update soon:) And thank you for making an Ottawa Senators fanfic there isn;t a lot I can find:)

I love this! please update soon:) And thank you for making an Ottawa Senators fanfic there isn;t a lot I can find:)

I'm enjoying this. Please update soon :)

This looks like it will be an amazing story. I can't wait for more. :)

I just about screamed when I saw that this was about Karlsson. I hate the Sens (go Leafs go?) but Karlsson is one good looking Swede and Swedish men will be the death of me. Ahah, I like this so far! Good luck in the contest! (: