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  • cemetery

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    Not really my cup of tea as I usually just read Frerard fanfiction or other fics related to My Chemical Romance, haha, BUT! It's well-written, detailed and you have a great story line! As some have said before me I'm surprised you don't have more comments, cause you deserve more readers/comments :)

    Anyway, keep it up. You're a really good writer :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • Desi Galaxy

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    Hooked from the moment I read the Summary! Everything is so well written and completely detailed! I was literally hanging onto every word. Subscribed! Please update, soon. I'm excited to see their relationship grow. :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 10:15am
  • IceDeath.

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    Love the story. There should be more comments on here. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!
    April 1st, 2012 at 07:15pm
  • iron and graphite;

    iron and graphite; (100)

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    This NEEDS to be more popular! This was awesome. The detail, and how well you wrote it was flawless. I love the summary, too. It's short, but gives just enough information out. The layout was good, I really loved the banner. This will definitely be a great story!
    March 31st, 2012 at 01:57am
  • Painted Smiles

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    Oh my gawd. How does this story only have three comments!? I found this story to be absolutely magnificent! It was well written, not too cliche, not too realistic-ish. I seriously love Willa. She's...different. But in a good way, ya know? And the guy, oh my lawd. I seriously wouldn't mind being pressed up against by someone who looks as beautiful as him ;D

    Okay, okay. Creeper side over! The layout is beautiful, I'm really jealous. The whole woods thing and the birds thing goes together perfectly. You have an amazing story, I swear :O

    Keep it up :D And I'm subbing....
    March 30th, 2012 at 12:44am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    LOVE IT! more :)
    March 29th, 2012 at 08:01am
  • Brain Dead Bipolar

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    The summary is good, not too much detail but just enough to hook the reader in. The layout is nice too, simple and yet not very simple and it doesn't distract from the story.

    Beautiful! This was written with such detail that I could almost feel the leaves and smell the earth as well as visualize a thick forest. This is like nothing I've read before and I like that. The mystery you left at the end left me wanting more, to find out more about the boy and more about Willa. Well done. this was beautifully written and I'm subscribing.
    March 28th, 2012 at 10:09pm
  • hiwagang hapis

    hiwagang hapis (1550)

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    I like it.

    YES. FIRST COMMENT.

    Anyways, I'm excited to read more of this c:
    March 28th, 2012 at 04:21pm
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