oooooh! Sexy is right ;) I REALLY LOVE the plot line of this story... and i'm not sure if I can wait much longer for the next chapter! You left your adoring readers hanging!
Got this story on comment swap and I’m a huge My Chemical Romance fan. I don’t usually read Frerards, I think this story could be good if you sorted out the spelling and grammar because it makes it very hard to read, and using the spell checker isn’t hard! Also capital letters should be at the beginning of a sentence and sometimes you missed them. But apart from that I actually did like the idea of the plot and it sounded quite interesting! It would be really good if you improved on the spelling and grammar side of it. : )
Ooh, I like this-and the layout picture is just EEEE! Haha, stupid village girls (and everyone) not loving Gee's shmexy red hair. I wish I was in the village, but then, the Frerardness wouldn't happen. Ah, decisions. Hope this is updated soon, can't wait!