I'm Not Looking for Love on the Shore - Comments

I think she can. that was a jerk move by all of them. Jealous or not

haha what they did was frustrating in a comedic way LOL
jasper seems sweet enough tho
hopefully the conflict doesn't last too long!

I think she and pauly would be really good together. Hope she doesn't stay mad at them. Update soon

hmm...i do think she is putting her feelings on jasper cause she doesn't know how to deal with her actual situation.
I so ship vinny and maria tho!
they are cute and halarious together!

oh noo :( i bet they messed up her date. update soon!!

love it, i really want to kno what the guys did to piss Maria off like seriously it must been pretty bad if she is wanting to hit them and especially if they are apologizing constantly, i really want her to be with Pauly they are cute together and they have such a great connection, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I love it X^D
Update soon
Can't wait to find out what happens
I wish her and Pauly will get together X^P...
I love Pauly D LOL.. C^X
I'm going CRAZY not knowing whats next o_O

Amazing. I love it! <3

She should you hookup with Pauly! Great story

Wtf. Your story is great. I love it!

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First of all, I love the cover picture! I love the Rule one and Rule two thing. Proof reading would be a good idea, I see a lot of grammar errors and a few spelling errors as well. I am not a huge fan of Jersey Shore, so I didn't really pay attention as I read it. But I must say, I like how you added in people. It sounds really interesting. So I will diffenetly recommend it. The story has potential to be extremely popular! So, with all of that being said! Good luck with this story! So keep writing!

Comment swap commenter, and I have to say I’m not a fan of Jersey Shore so I came upon this story with apprehension, and I apologise for that. I skimmed through a few things and I have to say it’s sort of interesting, although not really my thing. You need to proof-read a few things (as we all do), and maybe put some translations for the Italian right next to the phrases, but all in all it’s pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the advise.

Comment swap!
I hate Jersey Shore so I just skimmed it. I didn't know there was Jersey Shore fanfic! I do agree with Sam, you should translate the Italian phrases. It would really help with the fluidity.

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Sorry, but I can't stand Jersey Shore, so I read the prologue. You should put the Italian phrases in parenthesis or something, cause by the time I get to the bottom I don't remember what was really happening.
I didn't pick out any terrible grammar, so if the rest of our chapters are like that, good on you. You should plan better though, make it flow more. You talk about her being godmother, then hop to her getting on a flight; it doesn't fit or flow.
Just some advice, but keep it up, and if you ever write something not Jersey Shore, lemme know :)

I still love Vinny lol
He is so cute ^-^

her and pauly are adorableeee!
but i think there should be more scenes with the vinmeister! LOL
idk, i ship them two more than i do her and pauly

Ahhh i want her with Pauly!

Jasper seems cool but i want Maria to be with Pauly they r cute together, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Yea jasper's okay but i want her with PAULY X^D
I loved it
I hope her brother doesn't go back with that bitch
Update soon
I can't wait to find out what happens next X^P
YEAH BUDDY ;^)