Julius - Comments

Jeeeeesus, you're an incredible writer. I can't believe I've never stumbled upon your work before, but this is amazing. Doing a POV switch with each chapter is difficult in itself, but you do it so effortlessly, and you give these girls their own unique personalities. You reveal things about them in relation to Julius, who is so wonderfully developed - like oliver scott sykes; said, it's like he's a different person to each girl, and I just think that's really interesting. Damn, this is beautiful and tragic all at the same time.

okay this is incredible.

i screamed when i read "i crumble completely when you cry" because arctic monkeys and it was just perfect for this

truly speechless right now this is so incredible i can't even form words

oh daaaaaaarling, this layout is amazing.

Oh my fucking god, Julius you lil fuck
Makin me cry at 1 am and shit dear lord
This was crudely beautiful though and oh, Julius.

frick u make the best layouts

You just made me fall in love with Julius, too. He's supposed to be this big piece of shit, but the way these girls all describe him, you can't help but to fall in love yourself. I cried while reading this. I cried during every chapter. It's like Julius wasn't the same person for every girl. The only thing that remained the same was his drug habit and love of cherries. In some stories he seemed softer, and others he seemed more cruel.

I think the story that broke my heart the most was Lorelei's and I don't even know why.

You, my dear, are slowly but surely becoming my favorite author here on the Mibbs. Everything you write is so devastatingly pretty. I love it. And I can't get enough.

weyhey

Layout

Beautiful and simple, but baby lord jesus the pale gray and light, light baby blue BURNS MY EYES. I kept squinting and oh lord. I couldn't do it — i had to put it on custom layout. maybe darken the colors just a wee bit and it'd be good? but that's just my eyes.

Chapter one

Establishing the hot and mysterious Julis, oh yes. I feel sorry for all the girls he got involved with, because obviously he has these hypnotic powers that drag them all in and destroys them. let's get this show on the road, dawg.

Chapter two

Oh no this girl I felt extremely bad for. No no no no no. It's so sad and so realistic and I feel like many girls go through this, aside from the him dying part. and now she has to live without him? god so fucking sad. you showed her emotions too well for me to handle.

Chapter three

Wow sounds like a 'good girl' with her catholic school, but she sells pot and fucks multiple guys and is dying for Julius to notice her. I felt bad for this girl, too; she obviously wanted Julius so bad, him being different and all.

Chapter four

This girl seemed to have it the hardest so far. Her hectic relationship with Ju-Ju and then he dies? Wow. and seven years, too. just really fucked up. and then ending of her chapter is how most girls feel, so i understand that one hundred percent.

Chapter five

peaches oh no oh no best friends? that fucking sucks. and everyone hating his guts? i'm assuming it's because he broke many hearts, but it may be something else? peaches had it pretty hard, too.

oh lord pearlina seems like the pathological liar. and sorry, honey, because he kissed many girls in many different places. he ran right over her, and wow oh god i'm experiencing things atm.

Chapter six

oh FUCK rosemary though???? holy shit this chapter gave me those most insight to everything than all the others. i got so fucking jealous of your writing style in this chapter too?? wow you're amazing. simply amazing. YOU should be your own favorite author, and i would only kanye shrug because you have all the room to be full of yourself. i need to learn from you, man.

this chapter was gorgeous. i read it one more time. fuck i love you, like seriously??

Rosemary, would you kill for me?

OH FUCK I GOTTA STOP. SHIT.

Chapter seven

this chapter just gave me more insight to julius' mind. he sounds so fucking mysterious and i'd absolutely love a story with just his life, but then would that be too much??? wowowow i'm falling in love with julius, too, and that's bad. so bad. youre great, y'know that?

Chapter eight

another beautiful chapter. more into julius and is psychopathic ways, and more into just this entire fucking story. julius, once again, sounds like a beautiful mess. oh yes.

Chapter nine

ending this with a sad chapter, i see? poor julius, my baby boy, i just want to hold him. and she seems so much more emotion-filled than the rest. she sounds so lovely, and they were a lovely, broken mess together.

i must end this review by saying that i love you, and how you write, and i will forever be wildly jealous. youre my baby girl.

This is a very enticing story. I love the characters, and your description is lovely. It sort of reminds me of something Francesca Lia Block would write.

I'm curious, do you know the name of the model you used for Tallulah? Or if you happen to have the picture?

Anywho, keep it up!

i dont know how you've done it but this is the best thing ive ever read even better than idk but goddamn i am screaming at this whole chapter i seriously wish i could copy and paste my favourite parts but its the whole thing and i am crying maybe once i calm down ill write you something good but i cant jesus christ i think im in love

goddamn lula i dont even think i can LEAve a proper comment

oh my fucking god

wow fuckin wow i just love all those little details you thrown in the cherry thing makes me smile idk WHY but it does and its so cute and really like misty and all the other girls wow lula stop it you're perfect

He started all his stories with Once upon a time… i loved that part and this is so fucking perfect i'm kinda sitting here in awe of the entire thing tbh

why would you hate this why why wHY WHY

ok ever since you spoiler alerted me i like read each chapter like twenty times to find parallels and jesus christ lula you are a fucking genius and i feel like the whole first second third fourth fifth sixth relates to "you know" (i can't ruin it for the rest so im being sly with my comment pls get it pleeeasse) and like the seventh when he was gone was like the rest or something. i hope to god i dont sound stupid in this but omg i love you

MY NEW FAVOURITE CHAPTER FUCK i have a feeling i'm going to be saying that with every single update so be prepared but the first line was so good and i love how you manage to write in so many different point of views without seeming repetitive with your characters, i loved this and i cant wait for the next chapter

I love this story its absolutely amazing...its witty and mysterious

ahh and chapter six is my favourite so far

I fucking hated Julius. The only reason he hung around was to destroy me. He swallowed me whole only to shit me out. so fucking good, i love this story and it's such a creative idea