You Light up My World - Comments

well, I'm not going to lie... when ts story was given to me to read for the comment swap, I kind of--no not kind of, I DID--squealed because I love love LOVE josh hutcherson (that beautiful jaw!!!!) and I was so excited to read your story.
and lemme say, the story definitely didn't disappoint! I've seen a lot of good writers, and I've seen a lot of. .
not so good writers. but you're definitely categorized in the good writers! you give lots of detail, which (for me, at least) is key to a great story!! I say that all the time, in a lot of my comments but I think it's really true.
I really really REALLY can't wait for you to update this story because it's pretty awesome. keep writing, and update soon so I don't have a mental breakdown!!! - Olivia <3

Awh, i dont find your story worthless! I loved this chapter, but it made me wish i was juliet. haha

Your story is great! Cant wait for josh and juliet to kiss!

I really love your story! I hope you update it sometime soon :)