Ohmygosh lol You captured the essence of Jennifer lol I live this story It is adorable and hilarious. I laugh a lot while reading it. The only thing I say bad is to proof read before you post. You have a few grammar mistakes and missing words but I won't report you lol We all make mistakes.
Squeaaaaa!! Your story is just adorable. I can totally just picture myself in the place of Juliet, and go through the entire chapter with her. Please update soon!!
I mean, I still loved the chapter and I really think you should update, but I was looking forward to that lol