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  • Emily_Haner

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    i loved this !!!! i'm going to read the sequel now because this got me glued to my computer :)
    December 14th, 2012 at 12:18am
  • gowiththeflow

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    :D YAY! I actually laughed out loud at this line: "'But I don't know if I have time in my life for a boyfriend. I mean I already have a husband," HAHAHA. I'm going to check out the sequel now :D
    June 16th, 2012 at 12:09am
  • gowiththeflow

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    D'aww, they're so adorable. I don't like Sam, go away Sam!
    June 16th, 2012 at 12:07am
  • gothique4

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    awww you can't end it there - there must be a sequel woman! I can't get enough of these two being sarcastic as hell to each other
    June 15th, 2012 at 11:29pm
  • MaryJane_2013

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    Ahhhhh sequal plz
    June 15th, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Omg r u serious tht can't be the end, we readers deserve a sequel immediately I mean will their relationship work and hello what about Sam???? *chanting 'sequel' over and over*
    June 15th, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • Spoileddxbrat

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    Awe :) I hope this isn't the end >.< if it is you need to make a sequel like there's many questions burning! And if their relationship would wok out! Oh and Sam! So sequel or something :)
    June 15th, 2012 at 06:47pm
  • shorty123

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    Please make a sequel! I love this story so much!
    June 15th, 2012 at 06:28pm
  • wildwiththewind

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    Aw! I loved the end! It was pretty darn cute.
    June 15th, 2012 at 06:19pm
  • gothique4

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    Brian is gonna be jealous as hell if he thinks that Sam is coming back into the picture. I had a smile on my face the whole time I read this - he's so sneaky with grabbing her boob and trying all his sexy moves on her. I don't think it will take her long to give in :p
    June 15th, 2012 at 05:42am
  • MaryJane_2013

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    lol they are so cute it kills me everytime
    June 14th, 2012 at 11:40pm
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I'm not the biggest fan of Avenged Sevenfold, but I like this story. First of all, there's not many grammar errors. It's a good story. Has a good plot line and just, I like it. I love the chemistry her and Brian seem to share and just how everything seems to flow.

    <3
    June 14th, 2012 at 09:55pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, Aj needs to stop playing these games becuz I kno tht she likes Brian but won't admit it and Sam is coming back I the picture what?!?!? Hmmm is Aj goin to call Sam back, will Brian ever find out what Aj is hiding in her phone, and is Aj and Brian goin to ever get together officially I mean Aj didn't answer Brian's question when he asked her if she wants to be his girlfriend....cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 14th, 2012 at 07:53pm
  • SuicideCommando

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    Awesome chapters! I can't wait for more.
    June 12th, 2012 at 04:57pm
  • f4lcon

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    I love this!
    Please update soon!
    :)
    June 9th, 2012 at 04:46am
  • gothique4

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    oh man I just love these two - they're as sarcastic as hell to each other (well maybe more on AJ's side than Brian's lol) but even through that you can see the chemistry.

    I loved his comment about celebrating her empty womb :-)

    Yep, I agree with Brian that he's not gonna end up spending the night on the sofa and they're gonna practice making babies again :p
    June 9th, 2012 at 02:05am
  • gowiththeflow

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    I love their relationship XD it makes me giggle.
    June 9th, 2012 at 01:26am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    LOL they are so cute together :P
    Update soon
    I can't wait to see what's next XD
    June 9th, 2012 at 12:57am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it....Aj and Brian r funny together, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 11:04pm
  • skatergurl2013

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    WRITE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *get mob ready*
    June 8th, 2012 at 05:36pm