Stranger - Comments

Omg so I know Im late reading these stories BUT I finished this one just now and WOW! That was definitely unexpected! Sooo reading the sequel next! Oh and Matts an ass. Lol

Oh wow...that's sad...can't wait for the sequel :D congratz

holy crap Matt went from saviour to out and out dirtbag in the space of one chapter. I can't believe he said all of that shit to her, and wouldn't beleive what she was trying to say. Any man with half a brain would be going "OK, let's get a pregnancy test" instead he loses his shit and acts like a two year old.

All he's probably succeeded in doing is pushing her back into Brian's arms and then he's gonna cry little a little bitch and blame everyone else. Subscribing to the sequel coz I wanna know what happens dammit! :-)

What?! She may be pregnant and he breaks up with her? How could he do that? He worked so hard just to screw it up? D: I'm in tears. Poor Grace. I'm pissed at Matt right now. >< Asshole. Can't wait for the sequel!

O helllll no!

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I will kill you

DUN DUN DUNN+++

Me too...I hate when people say that they need to talklove the chapter congratz and KEEP THAT THING UP hahahahaa :D....

"We need to talk." The worst thing people can say because I always think worst case scenario. Did you really have to leave it there? I'm going to stress over it until you update again. D: But I did like that Grace wanted to hang out with her friends. :) Update soon please!

hot damn woman that was hot - now why can't I have hot technicolour dreams like that. I had a dream last night about a huge ass spider. I think I got ripped off lol

yeah she seems to be subconsciously aware of the tension between them but she's probably choosing to ignore it as she doesn't want to come between them as friends. I can't wait for her to see them both in the flesh after that dream. This is gonna be interesting.

That was fucking hot. Though I doubt it would ever actually happen. I don't think Matt would really trust Brian to do that. But Grace can have her little fantasy, and her dream did show off the tension between them so she can't be completely blind to it, right? Just choosing to ignore it maybe? Amazing update! :D

I know I cant be the only one the pronounced:

"I'm watching you, Haner."

In a complete predator voice...

damn Grace really has the blinders on if she can't spot the tension between the two of them - I can sort of them picturing them just going "fuck it let's just have a threesome" but that's just probably jsut wishful thinking on my part lol

I hope Matt and Brian don't go all bloodsport over her

I know Grace is really wanting them to be friends, but she also needs to realize that it's not going to be that simple. It's way too obvious that Brian's just kissing her ass in hopes of winning her over. I'm more than positive that at least half of the words he spoke were bullshit. I just hope this doesn't end too badly. Great update! :)

Heated up ...wow Matt was kind of an ass with her...thing God JIMMY SAVED THE DAY :D...great chapter...keep it up

At least Matt decided to put his insecurities aside. He doesn't need to let Brian get in his head or else he's going to screw up everything he has with Grace right now. And there's going to be a sequel? :D Yay! But I'm a little scared of that shocking ending you have planned. If it's anything like my shocking endings, it won't be good. Loved the update! :D

Matt should of punched him..

YAY...Matt nervous again...he's so hot. Brian is gonna get his now... LOOOOVVEEEEE IITT :D congratz

Dammit Brian. >< He continues to piss me off. But I'm happy Grace is awake now, and that she wants to get better. Not like Matt would give her much choice. I also like that she didn't want Brian near her after that incident, which should be plenty proof that she doesn't want him. But stupid Brian had to get in Matt's head. Asshole. Great update!

OMG...Matt is just awesome. Love when he gets violent hahaha . Great chapter. Please update :D