@ Snow.White.Queen. Wow thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it as much I'd hoped you would. I appreciate that you took the time to comment. It means a lot to me.
Wow I actually loved this. I like how you havn't written it from either persons point of view, that makes it more interesting. I love how much emotion you've managed to get across, it makes the story so much better. You've left me wanting to read more, I really think you should have turned this into a full story!
Wow thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it as much I'd hoped you would. I appreciate that you took the time to comment. It means a lot to me.