Down the Rabbit Hole - Comments

I love this story!
hate Arabeth! so glad she's now locked up and being tortured!
can't wait for next update!

Whooo the bitch is locked up and going to be tortured :-) :-)

I like the Hater - he's kinda like Jimmy but in a more eccentric way

aawh hater- he's kind of adorable!! with his clapping and just scattered mind
wiiiooo they've got the bitch locked up finally!! yay!!
ouch! she cut a piece of syn's skin to eat.. *yuck*
the bitch is whacko!!
totally looooove this story <3

yay you updated!!!!!

Oh man, what does Arabath want with Syn, apart from his hot body that is. I hope that he, Christ and Vengeance are all OK.

Poor Rev :-( That must suck so bad not being able to sleep.

Can't wait to see what the plan is :-)

aawh it's back <3
the evil witch took them all prisoner, some managed to escape.. damn i wonder what she wants with syn..
got some background on rev, poor thing wants to sleep
i wanna know what the deathbat decides

i love this - I've finally got my internet back and I'm trawling through 8 pages worth of stories. Eep I'm gonna be here a while

I love this chapter, and I've just got this mental image of a cute deathbat turning it's head to the side while it listens to her

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!

love this please update soon

The guys will protect lexi, right?!

Loved the new chapter cant wait for more! :3

“I’ll kill you. Slowly but surely I’ll eat you alive and kill you.” Arabath growled. Lexi eyed the angry women nervously. She honestly hadn’t thought that part through.

hahahahah!! oops
aaawe the deathbat sounds really cute can't wait to find out what he'll choose to do

Oh damn, it got real, real quick.

O_O

I must know what happens next!

aaah shit!! shadows soul?? i do not like that damn evil bitch.. hahah but uh, lexi and syn's totally adorable together

oh man so the wicked witch of the west has now turned up - damn I'm kinda hoping that Lexi will just rip the bitch's head off

I love this story its one of the best ones Ive read xD

"some magical cave or mine. The place of mystery and wonder, the place Rev sent his pants to die and life was born at the same time." My favorite line.

Nice story :D

This is the best story I've read on mibba & I've been a member since '10

"I'm tired of being manhandled by you fruit cup" was possibily the funniest line in this entire story thus far.

Love this, can't wait to read how the ceremony goes down!

oh man as much as I love corsets that one sounds like an absolute torture device

"I feel like a junkyard threw up on me" has got to be the best line ever lol

Oooh, the hatter seems a bit nuts and he must be weird as hell if even Jimmy doesn't like him

hahahahah the things she gotta wear.. i'd run like a bat out of hell if i were her!! awe rev actually hating someone? mad hatter..

You know shit has gotten serious when Jimmy's wearing pants. :)