Down the Rabbit Hole - Comments

wooah goosebumps!! Brian kissed her!! wiiieee
uh.. i don't like sevenfolds monkeys.. they're bat shit scary... hahah
jimmy in pants?? now that is a scary thought..!!
aawe she'll do the whole ruler thing, that's awesome!! can't wait for more <3

okay I'm never going to the zoo and watching the poop flinging monkeys in the same light ever again lol

loved the update, and wow I never thought I'd see the day that she'd agree to rule. And awww Bri kissed her :-)

please please please please please please update soon love this so much

love this please update soon love love love this

I just love how she was able to read the two fake elders so easily and Zacky couldn't. Damn that propechy the real elder just sprouted was kinda spooky

hahaha she's so smart, and that she gets things that zacky don't is so funny they got their elders back but also a bad ''omen''?? :O

aawwe seriously.. Syn/Brian.. He was soooo cute in this new chapter <3 and wanting old her back

LOVED the new chapter, please update soon. i love this story it's original and I think it's awesome!!!

aawe this chapter was so sad... poor lexi :(

i love the update - I just could picture Matt laughing hyserically on the floor why Syn was having his freak-out about Lexi biting him

I can't picture Syn being the saviour of the people - he's too much of a cocky jackass but maybe that's more of a show for Lexi's benefit

I can't wait to read more - this story is so unique and interesting

hahaha tattoo shop dudes was funny :P
the place Rev sent his pants to die.... totally made me lol!!! :D
and shadows laughing so hard he was on the floor.. so darn adorable!!
huh, i'd never guess that Syn did all those things.. he isn't really who i thought he was.. which now is awesome :D

can't wait for the next update.. i totally frickin love this story.. makes my imagination go crazy while picturing everything that you describe in it <3

omg i love this story please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alice In Wonderland ain't got shit on this! THIS IS PURELY AMAZING!

aawe why wouldn't she act on it?? i mean come on it's syn :D he's just so awesome when she makes him mad :D
and shadows.. poor teddybear, too easy to read <3
woooaaah lizard man, don't like him one bit O_o
and M.I.A?? sounds like a fun place... not.. :D

i just love her interactions with Syn - they're absolutely hilarious and it's so funny seeing him get so annoyed and flustered. She had Matt pegged to a tee - a big ol teddy bear :-)

The twin thing was kinda weird and freaky and now I'm wondering just what the hell it actually is. Not too sure I'd want to go to a place called M.I.A. either lol

can't wait to read more

Ok, love love loved the body language stuff in here. I've studied up on it some myself, so I was freaking out the whole time I was reading this because it was just great. :) I also loved the twist that Zacky can read people, too.

woaah vengeance is creepy with his ppl reading skills O_o i would hide under a blanket or something to keep him from staring at me.. hahah.. jimmy i just.. he is so damn adorable! syn, he got such a short temper it's funny XD
johnny being a protector type of person? cute :D
and shadows, hulk-teddybear.. awes!! :D
STAY AWAY FROM PINK!! LOL..!!

lovin' this story so much :D

Then who is she??? Love the story by the way

oh my god I am so in love this story - it's so awesome and different. It's spooky how easily Zacky can read her, and she's already picked up that Matt's a teddy bear :-)

Can't wait to read more

horses that talk and wears hats... hahahah XD
this story is so funny and weird <3
aawe syn let her bring the cat with them!! i would totally hold onto him a little longer ;D