Dormir. - Comments

The French title caught my eye and then the layout really drew me in. I love that banner image and I really enjoyed that the woman calls her ma chérie in the story, giving it a connection to the title.

You write such powerful short stories and your imagery is always beautiful. Your words create such a vivid image and I think you really captured the feelings of depression and pain so well. I feel this piece is quite relatable. Sleeping the day away because it's better than being awake and dealing with everything is such a common way to feel and you've described it so wonderfully.

I like the ambiguousness over what exactly happened that has Rosie feeling this way. I really like these snapshot one-shots you do where it's like a small glimpse into the life of the characters with no explanation, it's just like watching people live their lives as it's happening.

You have a real creative talent.

I love this! Your banner and layout is awesome, and everything in the writing is illustrated very well. Your details are awesome. Very, very great job! <3

This is beautiful. The layout, the writing, everything. It does a great job at describing how you just want to sleep, through so much pain. It's very realistic, and well-written. I don't have any criticism for this, it's just so good. Great Job <3