When Our Eyes Collide - Comments

Here from Le Comment Swapping.

So the layout is lovely. It's easy to read too. Your banner is awesome and I love how you haven't just used one band. That makes it interesting. Your writing is good, and the flow is definitely there. Your plot is good and I'd like to read more. Good job!

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So as I started reading this I realised that I actually read it already so I just had to refresh my memory a little, your combined writing is all amazing and your description is awesome, I love that you used a variety of bands rather than just concentrating on one... I didn't spot any mistakes at least none that made me stop reading or have to re read sentences! The layout is awesome as well!

Please, update this !

Pleeeeeeease update! I love this so so muuuuuuuch

Hi there! I found this from comment swap. I'm enjoying it so far. I like the variety of bands and members you use and warped tour is always kick ass. Your grammar and sentence form is spot on. Can't wait to read more and keep up the good work! =D

I think you need to update missy. :P Great story!

Oh wow, I'm officially subscribed. Your chapters are the perfect length and I love everyone that is included in this Fan fiction, you have great writing skills by the way, and your theme is amazing! Did you make it yourself?

Keep writing and good luck!

I really like this story so far!
I'm only on chapter three right now but I hope you keep writing more!