This is my (slightly late) review for the contest:
First of all, sorry for taking so long to review this, especially as the contest only received two entries. I really like it - the story was really interesting, and pretty unique too; I very rarely, if ever, see stories about monsters and stuff on Mibba. The description was fantastic - I think my favourite line was "My skin and bones and blood have fused to the stones of the wall," and I also really liked the description of the door when it opened. The fight scene was really good, as I could actually picture what was going on, and it contained the right amount of detail. Overall, I really like this story. :D
First of all, sorry for taking so long to review this, especially as the contest only received two entries. I really like it - the story was really interesting, and pretty unique too; I very rarely, if ever, see stories about monsters and stuff on Mibba. The description was fantastic - I think my favourite line was "My skin and bones and blood have fused to the stones of the wall," and I also really liked the description of the door when it opened. The fight scene was really good, as I could actually picture what was going on, and it contained the right amount of detail. Overall, I really like this story. :D