Is Taken Me Away - Comments

  • paralumana

    paralumana (115)

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    Your writing style is rather unique, and you also painted the scene very meticulously. I like how you expanded the character's every thought and how you elaborated on everything about the setting and your character's perspective. It's a new concept, this story, because it's not about typical romantic one-shots or werewolves or band fan fictions. I thank you for that. Might I add that I adored this very much! (( :
    June 11th, 2012 at 02:39am
  • Lady of Bats

    Lady of Bats (100)

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    Hello, I love this story. It's very well written and flows quite nicely. You have done an amazing job. It was quite enjoyable to read. I love how you have written a few of the things, like the wives to kiss part, and the last bit. It was amazing. Great work.
    June 9th, 2012 at 01:58am