Glass Flowers - Comments

I can honestly say that this has already become one of my favorite One Direction fics on here! It's so well written which is great considering I haven't come across that many on here that are and it's definitely different, but obviously a good different. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

I love love love the way that they met. Plus it's the best thing when characters start to take on their own lives. That's how I love writing because I'm just the story teller. c:

I still think this will be so interesting with Chloe and April especially if Harry falls for her. Ugh. I can't imagine the bitch fit that is going to happen.

Update!

This is the first decent One Direction story that I've come across.
I simply adore it. ♥

I think the meeting between April + Harry went perfectly, sweet and sincere + cutely awkward.

Words can't describe how much I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship blossom. :)

Please update soon.
- lots of love, a fellow directioner. xo

Ou I really like this plot! Hope you update soon :)

Oooooou I like it a lot (:

Beautiful layout, fits the story setting perfectly. The story is well written and the description is intriguing. Well done :)

Update soon? c:

I do not usually enjoy fan fictions, but this is actually quite good. I realy do adore the layout. It's simple and cute and I love it with all my heart. As for the summary, I think by "leam" you meant "learn" I presume?

Aside that, well done

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I'm really liking this story. c:

Loveee this! Update soon please? :D

I know of this band because of my niece so it really interests me a lot now. I love how you describe the plot-line. It looks a promising story. Defiantly subscribing :)

Your layout goes well with the story!

I really like the layout. I'd just suggest that you make it centered, because side layouts are a bit annoying to read, but the colors and banner are amazing. The story is really cute. I like some 1D, though I'm not much into fan fiction, yet. Ha. This was well written, and I always enjoy a good "the plain girl in the popular girl's shadow" sort of stories. They have an appeal that I feel you really worked well into this story. Awesome job. :)

This is adorable! It's so cute, really. Super, super cute. I love the concept of it. It's very unique, the way she's going to get to know this boy for her friend. It's not cliche, but it does have a touch of the regular which is comforting while the story is still very out of the box!

There's one thing I notice. You have a lot of small paragraphs that could be turned into bigger paragraphs. Like the beginning of the second chapter could just be like this:

Trust Chloe to not only get a guy, but an international superstar and member of the ultra-famous band One Direction. The girl will never cease to amaze me with her capacity to attract members of the opposite gender. When she first mentioned the name Harry Styles, I couldn’t really believe it. “Wait, that guy with the hair? From the band OneRepublic?”

You could also beef up the details. Tell us more about these girls. How old they are, where they live, how they met, just more about them. I feel as if I don't know them below the surface.

Other than that, great job!

I really love this story already! Update soon :)

I loved the layout, it's so simple and fits so well and I liked the words in the banner, really unique :) The summary really drew me in, you've really managed to capture a unique storyline rather than the typical meeting at the concert and falling madly in love.

I adore the character of April, mainly because she reminds me a bit of me! And I love how you've written the friendship between her and Chloe, the way April has felt in her shadow and might even resent that subconsciously, but would still do anything for her :) It looks like it'll be a really well thought out and original story, so well done :)

I'll admit too I've never listened to One Direction except maybe one song, but I find this story really interesting! What a concept of her having to get her friend's boyfriend to fall her...probably may not be as easy as she thinks :P

Looking forward to more, this has captured my attention.

comment swap:
KEEP THIS!
Seriously, I'm not a huge Harry Styles, One Direction fan, but I didn't even feel like I was reading about this in a manner my sister squeals about all the time. I'd love to know more about the main character who has to get close to Harry, but you gave a great description of everyone else and the feelings.

Especially the break-up, for her to get angry shows that they are very close to each other.
I think this is fantastic and will do great!

KEEP IT.
I LOVE IT.
AWESOME PLOT LINE, I LOVE WHERE IT'S GOING SO FAR.
<3 defs subscribing to this, it sounds really interesting!

Keeep!
Definitely keep!
I absolutely love your layout and banner c:

For Comment Swap:

I really enjoyed reading this. And might I add, I absolutely adore the layout. The title of the story made me think of my last title for my previous story "Glass Wings" aside that, this was beautiful. I love it from the bottom of my heart, I really do.