Oh gosh, a newborn in the zombie apoclypse, now that's just scary and I wish the best of luck to Shiloh! Honestly, when Hunter was being born, I thought the baby would come out as some deformed half zombie thing. But your idea was better! Just a tip, you're very repetetive with starting your sentences with 'She'. Play with your words for other ways to start them. The story started pretty good, though Shiloh seems to calm for her own good. She's also VERY lucky.