I am in love with this story and it is only two chapters. I love your work you are an awesome writer. I can not wait to read more so update as soon as you can.
PERFECT....JESUS CHRIST....MATT is adorable...you're the best writer ever hahaha...I'm in love with your story. I seriouslly think I'm gonna dream with this tonight... You have serious skills on writing. I wish I was like that :D
This may not count as a comment, but I feel the need to leave one. I enjoy the long chapters. Vampire/Avenged Sevenfold have died down a bit, but I think you'll bring it back. Knowing what I know this story is going to kick ass, and it'll gain back of it's former glory ;)