Very, Very Good!! I just love Frank in this story! That was pretty twatish of them to leave him down there but otherwise he would have never been able to do it. Or he'd do it and assume that killing all of them would be that easy. I loved the description of the vampire. It was very realistic. Awesome. Go Frank!!!
:O i really love this i read all chapters at once and they were all awesome i thought the description used througout, i noticed especially in chapter one was very good. Tosh and Owen are so cute together, bless them! I love how authoritive Gerard is : P
"Owen, if the world was about to end I think he might have called us." That line really made me laugh XD
Well done guys looking forward to the next update xxx
alkjsapoiga so cute. both of the past two chapters. frank's character is just adorable in this, although what did you expect me to say *cough i made ellie put frank in this cough* and owen and tosh and so cute together (:
I call it.... Untracable. Cos i just watched that film and it pwned ass!!
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