Broken Glass, Your Fake Reflection - Comments

I absolutely loved this story! Not much to criticize here, so this will be short and sweet (:

Very few grammatical errors that are worth pointing out, so I'll just leavet that out! You actually linked the contest in your summary, which will get you brownie points, since a lot of people didn't even bother to do that.

Your plot wasn't the same-ol'-same-ol', which also gets you kudos from me! I feel like you had a lot of fun with this story.

Thank you so much for entering this story in my contest, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I'll be sure to let you know when the winners are posted!

I totally thought that it was Brian the entire time until she screamed out Zacky's name... i was surprised :) it was well written though and i liked it very hot :)

I thought it was Brian
When Azreal screamed Zachary I was pleasently surprised
It was Hot and well writen
Loved that it turned out to be Zacky
Great Job

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