I Can Keep a Secret - Comments

Yay! :D

@ Nanook
Yeah I'm not sure where I'm going with that story but with step brother I just reread some of it and I think I have a plan :)

Hey! I'm so happy you responded to me. :DD
I'm just gonna respond to both story comments here to make it easier. lol.
Hmm... I'm not really sure where to advise to go with this story... if you simply finished it with a few updates I would understand. But I just felt like it should have more of a conclusion. You know, her and Alex get married or something, or they don't, however you wish to end it.
As for your Step Brother story, I'm not sure what your plan with that one was. I kind of got the vibes that maybe Alex has feelings for the girl in that one? Or maybe I'm like totally off... I'm not sure if that's where you planned on going with it. But yeah, you kind of left off with her not wanting to go with her father so you could probably follow up with that a bit and then get into the Alex thing...
The reason I sensed this is because Alex got so pissed off when she was going out with Zack. But maybe that was just a protective instinct thing. Idk, what were your thoughts with that?
But yeah, I really hope you do continue. :) If you need any ideas, I am here. And like I said, I'll be here to read. :)

@ Nanook
I definitely plan to continue this, just need some ideas. Im having insane writers block for every story i have

So I just stumbled across this, I think it's really good. Very dialogue-centered, but I like that about it. It keeps things simple with the story and not too overly detailed.
If you ever choose to finish this someday, I will be here to read it. I really hope you do. :)
Just wanted to leave the comment letting you know people are still stumbling across it. :)

no problem. :)

@ LaConquistadora
haha thanks. And didnt relise i spelt it wrong XD i feel so dumb!!! :P

Looks good! I think it's a good story, but I noticed that the word "eventually" you write as "adventually." I think it's cool that the main character doesn't drink. :)

such a good story!