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  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update
    August 19th, 2012 at 12:58am
  • Star Angel

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    love this update soon
    July 30th, 2012 at 08:51am
  • The Indecisive Libra

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    I don't like Ari what-so-ever. .-.
    Great story hope you update soon!
    July 28th, 2012 at 02:06am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    LOVE
    July 28th, 2012 at 01:16am
  • owlsongs1989

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    Nice update. So Syn is a bitch, he needs to learn how to be more sweet to her. Can't wait for more :D
    July 14th, 2012 at 03:18pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Loved it
    July 13th, 2012 at 12:00pm
  • shortygirl

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    She's finally defended herself somewhat..loved the update
    July 13th, 2012 at 07:33am
  • hachie

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    So Shadows isn't heartless, he does care for her even though he is the heartless bastard. He is concern that she is hurt or that he hurt her. I can't wait for the next update!
    June 18th, 2012 at 09:23pm
  • shortygirl

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    He never fixed her shoulder...loved the update
    June 16th, 2012 at 06:14am
  • owlsongs1989

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    Oh my Gates.... this is hot... need more of this chapter. Update soon :D
    June 16th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • MaryJane_2013

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    ohh lol well well mr.sanders aren't we just being naughty
    June 16th, 2012 at 05:51am
  • MaryJane_2013

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    wow talk about an asshole
    June 4th, 2012 at 09:31pm
  • hachie

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    Woah Brian is very heartless and sadistic! 0.0 He treats Lynn a lot worse than Matt does to her friend. I wonder what happened to cause Brian to be the way he is now. Maybe Lynn can change hims somehow. I can't wait for the next update!
    June 4th, 2012 at 08:48am
  • owlsongs1989

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    I love matt, hate brian... LOve this chapter.... need more
    June 4th, 2012 at 05:35am
  • gothique4

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    love the update but at least Matt is trying to be a little nice. Brian is still in douche mode - wonder how long it's gonna be before it clicks that that approach ain't gonna work with Lynn
    June 4th, 2012 at 04:19am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I loved the update.
    June 4th, 2012 at 02:45am
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update..I'd hate to be Syn's girl
    June 4th, 2012 at 02:41am
  • hachie

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    This is amazing!
    I love how you have two girls that are the complete opposite of each other.
    Lynn is more conserve and very polite but she has fiery attitude deep down and while Sage is very aggressive.
    I wonder why her father sold her to A7X
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 21st, 2012 at 10:41pm
  • melevolent fiction

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    just got caught up. i love it. keep writing for me
    May 10th, 2012 at 05:41pm
  • Star Angel

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    love this please update soon like nowish lol
    May 10th, 2012 at 09:09am
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