Elizabeth - Comments

Ah, this is still so cute. Just had to come back and read it again. ^_^

Published? About fucking time. Just saying. You're amazing and deserve to be a best seller. This was adorable. Ha. Stahp making cute things.

First off, I absolutely adore your layout. I goes well with the one-shot.

Excellent detail. I love writers who can make me picture what they are telling. Reading this, I felt sad for her. I would never let one of my friends go without a lot of overnight visits and loads of junk food. I know I would be a hell of a lot depressed if I was sickly and no one bothered to visit me.

Awe someone has a crush on Elizabeth. ;) Bringing her favorite flower and wanting to bring over her homework…I bet that was just an excuse to see her. Lol.

Wow. I can’t tell you how much I enjoyed reading this. I happy that she didn’t die…she didn’t right? She only fell into a dreamful slumber? Right? Please? Lol. This is a really great one-shot. Hehe, Philip will definitely be back to see Elizabeth. Or else. Haha. XD

I quite love this :3
I love Korn so it was pretty cool he was wearing a Korn shirt.
He sounded like a pretty cool kid.

It's just a cute story, y'know, of how people should never be forgotten. I've felt like Elizabeth sometimes. Getting a random visit from somebody you never knew cared is lovely. :D

I dunno what else to say about it; you're a talented writer. I read something else of yours - I can't remember what it was called, but it had a character called Jacklyn - and it was pretty amazing too. Would've commented, but my internet cut out. And now I don't remember it's name. :3

But the way you develop your characters is amazing.

THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!

Nice reference to Kamelot ;)

Seriously, this was incredible. You're an insanely talented writer, Kylee. Don't let anyone tell you different!