Ohmygod, fan girling so hard right now. I'm not really a gamer girl but the fact that One Direction are gamers made me what to read this. I really hope you update soon, can't wait until she meet them.!
Great detail in this chapter :) I like the fact that it was longer! Loved the "physically attractive...Very phys-" "LUSH, THE KETTLE!!!!" x3 Can't wait for her to meet the guys! Keep up the good work!
Wow, this story is great! I saw the title, wasn't so sure of it first but once i read the first chapter and i smiled at 'The irish one', i knew this should be good! The storyline is going good, i even got let down when she woke up from her dream:( and please post the next chapter soon! Just one small comment though, check for spelling? Loved 'Shes The Man' clip too, i lurve that film! Update soon!!!!
I started reading this as a comment swap thing Mibba is doing. Now, I am not a gamer, nor do I know of One Direction (I'm more of a Japanese Rock fan myself :p), but I really am enjoying this story! I hope that Lush gets to know the band better! I like how everyone interacts in here and seeing the relationships form.
I have two minor complaints: The layout is difficult to read (you ought to make the font color darker and larger if possible), and I think you should describe your clothing and appearances in your own words, rather than provide a link. It really helps the reader become wrapped up in the story as well as improve your own writing skills. I hate describing things, but I will admit that when I started doing this my stories did improve.
I will say that after reading this I did look up the band, and did recognize one of their songs! x) Pop really isn't my thing, but they're growing on me! :p Well I hope you continue! I am subscribed to this story now and would really love to see where it is headed! Good luck! :D
this is so cute, i love it. but you got the boys ages wrong. harry, niall and liam are 18, zayn's 19 and louis' 20. sorry but it was annoying me abit. anyway, hurry and update!