Stay With Me - Comments

@darkbunny96
Lol no problem.. And thanks for writing the story! Seriously :D

@ Maybe.
OMG I feel bad ive been meaning to reply to this for soo long! I told my friend about it and everything your comment just made my day I think I had a miniture freak out session :D Thanks soo much for it and I totaly agree with you o these bands being A+++++ :D

@ Stuart Richardson
haha your not the only person thats said this to me :)

Damn it, I loved it. My personal favorite chapter was the last one. Amazing. The storys well written, besides a few mistakes in ggrammer, but thaat's alright. Everyone maakes grammer mistakes. (ecspeacilly me, my keeyboard is not workingg very good at alll :/) Bbut the story itself was awesome! One of thee absoloute bestest I ever reaad!!!!!!!! I thinkk your a greaat writer, andd I won't hesitate to check out some of your otherr stories. It looks like you have a greaat tasste of music, too. I see Linkin Park, You Me Att Six, Panicc! At The Dissco, Papa Roach, Goodd Charlotte, Young Gunss. Man, they'ree all A+++++ bands. Well, back to toppic.: your story. It was awesome. I enjoyed reading it, evven though I don''t read stories on Mibba-- or any otther place-- too much. (I'm nott too much of a reaader) So to speak, I don't read because I can't find a story I like to read, aand I LOVED Stay With Me... it was exellent and the basic oppisite of ghastly, dire, and gruesome. (I neeeded a sireiouss escape from all the compelety ggory stuff I watchh) This story was like a complete blessing to me! I loved it a bunnchess!!!!!!!!!! I really can't find a story like this anywheree..... so yeahh, it was fantistic!!!!!!!!!!¡!!! (hehe upside-down !) :D <3 <3 <3

All I can really say I'd you have a lot of grammatical errors that kind of distract me from the story. But you have a great plot and chapter one is great. I'm a really big fan of short chapters, as I tend to get bored after awhile but that's not a problem for this. Keep it up.

I really like this :3
I really want her and max to be together! they seem so cute xo

Aw, this is really good so far!
Update soooooooon!

hey loved you new chapter soul twin....i have no credit so i can't text you so I'm commenting on your story, which keep getting funnier but i though you wernt gunna have Josh in the fight ?.....oh well it was still good and the best part is i know what's going to happen (SOUL TWIN POWER ACTIVATE)