Baby You Can Lay Me Down - Comments

I loved this. I've always loved the story of Bonnie & Clyde, & for you to give it a modern twist was amazing!!! I really enjoyed this.

Okay, so I didn't see any of that coming. Ahah.

I liked the idea. Two crazy people who are madly in love running around stealing a bunch of money and shit. Sounds like a good life style. :) I liked the relationship between the two crooks. It was cute how they never wanted to leave each other even though that doesn't really seem like something that two criminals would do. It was like the softer side to a criminal life. It was good. :)

I wish you went into a little bit more detail on their history though.

Keep writing! <3

Aww, this was sad! :/
I've never read anything quite like it before; it was romantic and intense, haha. Two people on the run from the law... I like it a lot. <3

I kind of wish I knew a little more about Mia and Frank's past, like how exactly they came up with the plan to steal the money and run away, how they ended up in prison before they somehow broke out, etc. but this was a really well-written one shot! Well done, I can't wait to read more from you~