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  • fiction246

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    @ xXxMCRsavedmexXx
    Just do what you can when you can. I can sympathise about not having much time. Unfortunately I end up reading and writing when I really shouldn't haha
    September 16th, 2013 at 11:30pm
  • A. J.

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    @ xXxMCRsavedmexXx
    SQUEEEE!!!! So happy you're writing. Don't worry about posting cuz you have so many other obligations that take priority. Sounds like alot of work, college and putting in a kitchen, but the end result will be awesome, I'm sure. Then you can bake and send me cookies. LOL Take care!
    September 16th, 2013 at 06:50pm
  • xXxMCRsavedmexXx

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    Thank you everyone for commenting and reading and putting up with my lack of updates! Unfortunately, it might be a while till the next chapter is up. I recently moved house and we're putting in a whole new kitchen and I've also started college so I don't have heaps of free time right now. I'm in the stages of writing the next part and I will try my hardest to finish it as soon as I can. I plan on writing several chapters so i always have at least one written out. Sorry for the wait, I'm hoping you're all still interested and reading - haven't heard from some of you in a while... :)

    @ JohnnyChristPuppy ... @ AJM1 ... @ StacieIerogeance ... @ Vengeance_of_Shadows ... @ The_Ghost_Of_You ... @ Meagan_Mayhem ... @ Devilslilgirlie ... @ Synzeeslash8 ... @ The Handers. ... @ Ihayley ... @ fiction246
    September 16th, 2013 at 06:26pm
  • A. J.

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    More more please!!! Loving this story so much.
    September 13th, 2013 at 07:23pm
  • JohnnyChristPuppy

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    Update update update update!!!!! Plleeaaassseeeee I need smutt, I haven't had enough of it this past week!!!! Pppllleeeeaaassseeeee!!!!
    September 1st, 2013 at 01:40am
  • JohnnyChristPuppy

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    -has bitten off all my nails reading this- Keep going!!! You can't stop now!!! Oooohhhhh, ppwweeeaaassseee update soon!!! Sorry I wasn't able to comment on the earlier chapters haha I loved them soooo much!!!!!
    August 18th, 2013 at 03:22am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    well all those did go through my head and i know matt is serious about him and brian having sex
    August 4th, 2013 at 06:20pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    well all those did go through my head and i know matt is serious about him and brian having sex
    August 4th, 2013 at 06:20pm
  • Unholy_Vengeance

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    @ xXxMCRsavedmexXx
    I'm zoo excited but whatever you choose to happen it'll still be awesome!!!! Can't wait :D:D
    July 31st, 2013 at 08:21pm
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    @ Vengeance_of_Shadows
    Haha thanks for the comment and I'm so sorry for the wait. I guess you'll just have to wait and see, I'm excited for the next part (I'm sure it'll be in the next chapter) but I don't want to say too much. ;) next chap shouldn't be such a wait.
    July 31st, 2013 at 10:48am
  • Unholy_Vengeance

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    Missed this so fucking much!!!! I still don't want Matt to rape Brian that'll fuck things up, BIG TIME!!!!

    I think Matt was serious, Brian will think he's kidding Nd that might drive Matt into proving he's serious and therefore forcing himself on Brian, which can lead to rape O.o

    Why does it lead back to rape?

    But anyway AMAZING chapter and I look forward to more!!!'
    July 31st, 2013 at 10:36am
  • xXxMCRsavedmexXx

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    @ The_Ghost_Of_You
    Yeah, I'm sorry it took a while. Like I said there was a part I couldn't remember. Brian HAD to say something that could have been taken suggestively but I didn't know what I had put initially. I ended up thinking of several things as you might have noticed. :) hopefully it was worth the wait.
    Only time will tell if he was. Thanks for commenting, it shouldn't be such a long wait till the next one, I've got a good idea where this is heading now.
    July 31st, 2013 at 12:50am
  • The_Ghost_Of_You

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    Yay, you updated! I didn't think you were going to at first, but I'm happy you did!

    I wonder if Syn was serious? He seemed like he was serious, but they were kinda joking around seeing how Matt was drunk. Well, I can't wait to see what happens next.
    July 31st, 2013 at 12:36am
  • Meagan_Mayhem

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    I'm so glad that you updated!! I've missed this story!

    As to your question, I don't think a rape scene would be best. I think that it would dissolve whatever small link he still has with the band. He's already walking a very thin line.

    I also don't see how the band would last if Matt raped Brian. Of course I can't stop you from writing it. There are lines you don't cross, that's one. I can't see the band, or Brian, ever forgiving Matt for that. I could see Matt trying, but stopping when he realizes what's happening.
    July 1st, 2013 at 06:45am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    I can handle reading a rape scene but like the comment below said if you plan on having them together at some point it you have to make it so brian doesnt fully trust matt or instead of rape you can have matt trying to force himself on brian and brian being willing? or something else
    June 22nd, 2013 at 05:50am
  • Devilslilgirlie

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    I have to agree with others, I can handle reading a rape scene, but if you plan to have Matt and Brian end up together it would be near impossible to believibly navigate around the aftermath of a rape. A near rape could be more plausible and might be a way to further invest Brian into the mental well being of Matt.
    June 21st, 2013 at 12:18pm
  • Unholy_Vengeance

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    AMAAZING! I don't mind rape scenes but, personally, I think its a bit too soon. Matt's already in DEEP shit! But that's unless Brian will probably enjoy in the end, possibly? Will the guys walk in and stop it? But its up to you though, no pressure :P
    June 21st, 2013 at 09:43am
  • Synzeeslash8

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    I love this story so fucking much! And ya know, I'm totaly okay with rape scenes, but I don't know, this story is far too much complecated already. Do however you want, I don't mind neither of the choices. But ravishing something so fucking beautiful like you described Brian.. God no, Matt would be more of an asshole. If it's even possible. But in some part, I totaly get him, I went through it myself. Please continue, I can't wait for more. Totaly in love with this awesome story! :)
    June 21st, 2013 at 08:57am
  • akmo4725

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    Please no rape scene. It would destroy him and Brian and the band would be done. Maybe make Matt sit down and pour his feelings out to Brian???
    June 21st, 2013 at 02:43am
  • lubaek.

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    Welcome back, by the way.

    I personally do not think that a rape scene would work. I don't know how you plan to write the whole thing, but after what gone down between Brian and Matt already, I don't think Brian would forgive Matt ever if he did that. There are some lines you don't cross. I don't know how they're going to grow to have a relationship if Matt /rapes/ Brian after he already beat him up.

    That being said, I don't how you imagine this playing out. But, I personally think a rape scene would be the wrong move. Maybe just Matt wanting it and pressuring but Brian denying and getting him off of him would be better because it can that can be explained away by Matt being drunk.

    But Matt taking advantage of Brian like that would destroy what little relationship they have left.
    June 20th, 2013 at 11:53pm