Ambition - Comments

I can't believe I'm just catching up on this now. I adored this story! Seriously, every chapter left me wanting more! Very well thought out and written :)

So sad that this story is over, can't wait to see what you write next!!

Loved it!

THIS WAS SO GOOD OMG
I don't know what to do with myself now that this is over :(
It was sooo good! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS

Im sad it's over! But great story!

That was such a sweet ending, I had to LOL when Natalie said she and Kris were getting a dog and the utensil in the eye bit was hilarious Great job and keep up the good work

I will really miss this story - I started with Natalie and then really got hooked when you branched out to Ambition.

The dynamic between Zoe and Sid was exasperating at times, but deep down you knew that if these two ever got past their hang-ups, they could really have something special. Obviously Sid's Mom saw it - and although it would take wild horses to drag it out of her, Natalie saw it too! It just took a while for Sid and Zoe to work things through.

Both Sid and Zoe grew as people throughout your story - and although everything wasnt tied up in a "happily ever after" ending, the reader clearly got the impression that these two were in it for the long haul, and that they would be able to deal with the bumps along the way. It was a REAL ending - ok, maybe not so much an ending, but a completion.

Good luck on your next project. I thoroughly enjoyed this one!!

Good to see Sid and Zoe still together and Happy :)
Thank you for writing such an amazing story

Can you put up a character list? I kinda want to see your vison of Zoe

I am so glad Zoe decided to take a bit of a risk and let herself into Sid's place - although part of me wonders what would have happened if Sid's parents decided to come back with him - could have been a little embarrassing!!

While I am glad that they both seem to be working towards a solid reconciliation, I am sad that this story is ending. It was such a great ride.

I look forward to the final chapter - and hope to see you have started a new story in the very near future.

Thank you for all your attention to detail!

That was hot, just what I needed to read this morning

This was a great update to wake up to!! Sad this story is coming to an end. as for your next story, I am a fan of the Penguins, so feel free to write another one about them...really looking forward to it, you are one of my favorite authors on here!!

Awesome chapter. A Tyler Seguin story would be amazing.

Can you hear my shrill fangirl screaming from across the ocean because that's what I'm seriously doing right now :D i know I'm nuts !!
That was amazing and perfect and post game sweaty sex fantastic !!

Love it

Love it <3

Love this story, I'll be sad when it ends!!

Damn, you end the chapter at the worse part! Ha, no I'm joking. Your writing is amazing and I always look forward to reading every chapter.

Love the chapter. Think they should ease back into it and end up together. Update soon, these 2 quick update gave been a real treat!!

I'd love to see a short paragraph from trinas pov on the whole situation and maybe she should march into that changing room and tell Sid he's be the biggest fool if he ever let the best thing that happened to him walk away.

He should go after her and tell her he's never letting her go.

Great stuff and thank you for the two updates in two days.

Two updates in two days - that is great!!

I think it was really good that they could talk rationally and get some of the misconceptions out of the way. Sid was right, though - it would have been too easy to kiss and let the passion cloud the real issues that they still had between them. They still need time to get over the hurt. But I think they really started to clear the air.

They may be able to get over the hurt - but I dont know if they will be able to get over the love.

As for Trina, I dont think she overstepped her boundaries - I think she is a mom who loves her son very much and wants to see him happy. And while she loves him, she is not blind to his shortcomings and knows that he is really not very good at the whole relationship thing. Maybe she blames herself a little, for allowing hockey to be too much of his focus, and is trying to rectify this a little. I think she sees how good Zoe is for him and really does not want him to miss out on a quality woman.

Sid needs some time to digest what transpired with Zoe - and really see that she is just as unhappy without him, as he is without her. If he really wants her to be happy, then he has to try and make it work with her.