The Menstrual Cycle of Love - Comments

The menstrual cycle of love is probably one of the most unique titles I have ever seen....this was a great story!

This was quite interesting. The title was interesting as well. I did notice some redundant phrases and extra words within some sentences, but if you re-read it thoroughly you might catch them too. I'd point them out in here, but it's hard to pinpoint all the places and such. But overall it was really good.

You should reread this and see how many times you say the phrases "as I do..." and "while he does..." It's really redundant, so I was just trying to make you aware. You should also use more sentence variety (meaning to vary the lengths and beginnings of sentences). Overall good story. I just thought that you'd want to know.

You should reread this and see how many times you say the phrases "as I do..." and "while he does..." It's really redundant, so I was just trying to make you aware. You should also use more sentence variety (meaning to vary the lengths and beginnings of sentences). Overall good story. I just thought that you'd want to know.

Awww I loved it!! It was hot and sweet at the same time!! Very good indeed. Matt is hot!
Also I love your username lol. It makes me smile and think of Mean Girls. ^_^

Matt smutty fan fic!!
I loved the story and this has a potential of being expanded, complete with many chapters. Their bittersweet relationship is what makes the story intriguing. It completely drew me in.

Their relationship is quite interesting, and I agree with how you compared it to the menstrual cycle of love. Haha. Accurate or what.

Also, who doesn't love a Matt fic, especially a smutty one? ;D