Dear Mr. President, - Comments

omfg you updated yES

I love the story. I love how you use different writing voices for Dante and Rae. I think it's amazingly cool that you can write Elvish. I have a question. How did you post the picture in you story because I've tried and can't Love the story sorry for being a silent reader for so long.

oh my goodness, I'm so in love with this. Like I'm seriously interested in learning Elvish now. ^-^ And gah I love Dante so much. I can't wait for more.

looking forward to more chapters?

This story is really cool so far! What site did you use to learn Elvish, is looks super fun! The characters are amazing by the way. Update soon?

so they're both boys, right?
and uGh i can't read that. UPDATE SOON

I either squealed or screamed. Not sure... Anyway, my friend knows Elvish. It's pretty cool. :D
Love this, and I'm looking forward to more. :D

why must the chapters suddenly end.

I really do love this story.

NOOO!!!!! i'm out of chapters. I love the fact the the chapters are short, and the paragraphs spaced out it means it's very easy to read. I love personality of both Rae and Dante. I feel that even if there chapters weren't labeled with who they are, i'd still be able to tell who letter it is because of the different voice you use to write them.
I really can't wait to see where this story goes.

This is amazing! Please keep writing!

I'm not sure if it's your layout or my computer playing up but the story is constricted into a 10 cm gap and i can click the chapter links. It's only this story. I can read others

Wow! 2 more already?? :D

Yayyy!!! New chapter! I'm really into this. I was thrown right into the action and I can't wait to see where this goes. :D This should have more comments, really.

ummm...I hope you're still writing this, because I really really like it.