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I have never read Harry Potter or watched the movies so the story kinda makes no sence to me. Also you are extremely far into the chapters and (no offence) but I dont want to sit and read 90 chapters on a subject I have no idea about.
I hope you continue to write and the story turns out well
Good Luck

I'm here from comment swap, or I usually wouldn't read this.
I just dislike reading a story that's already so far ahead, y'know?
Plus, I get a little confused while reading about Harry Potter.

I haven't read the books, just watched the movies. So I have to
research a lot of things mentioned.

However, I find this story has potential.
Good luck.
<3 <3 <3

Trial aftermath.. Love it..! Hehe... Good chapter and yep I'm writing this because my mind is entirely blank...

Yess! It's amazing how I find time in between "homework" and school to read this!

Lul, jk. I don't do my homework. :)

Good update. :D

And good luck with the essays and what-not.

Halloween is the 31st of October right? so school, homework.. everything I normally do.. Halloween isn't really celebrated here.. too much of an imported holiday for that. Plus we already have a holiday for dressing up and stuff, so why have two really? Anyways, I'm glad that her ex got himself thrown in Askaban and that a cure was finally found for her neck. hmm.. your personal life and so on does sound hectic.. hmm.. have a great halloween party! oh and good chapter!

Wonderful!
And your first Halloween???! Really? That just baffles me, its my favorite time of year! It sounds like it will be a good one though so at least your starting with a bang =D

Ok scratch the previous comment it was finally mentioned. Anyways.... More please!

Sooo I am on chapter 80 and so far I have noticed that her throat wound went from needing to be seen at mungos to disappearing out of the story completely. Did severus fix it did, she go to mungo's??...... I like the story btw but at chapter 80 that was bugging me.

Damn... Poor aurore... This is such a hard place for her to be.. I hope he'll do one in askaban and she'll be able to finally move on completely...

Oh and on an unrelated note; are you by any chance in London or know anyone in London, who can buy a jacket for me for my sister? She's completely in love with it and can't buy it online.

Back to the story, good chapter! :D

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Interestingly enough, I've never really read a Harry Potter fanfiction before, much less one that features Snape. I'm a huge fan of the Harry Potter books, so I did quite enjoy reading this. A couple things I could suggest, however, you could stand to be a bit more descriptive on things. Elaborate, explain why a character does something, describe the setting, ect. And another thing, it might be a good idea to italicize the French words, but that's just a though. Keep up the great work! You've got something good going for you here. xx

Im so antsy with anticipation. Your story has come along beautifully. I need to know what happens next!

I think I was rolling with it even before you said anything... But I'm a tad bit tired so not even I am sure about that one xD hmm... So the trial is really here? Poor aurore... This is going to suck... And blow... So much it's.. Idk, lost my train of thoughts there xD anyways, good chapter.

And so the trial soon begins.. I'm hoping for the best for her.. But who knows besides you what will happen.. Hmm.. Also I hope you'll feel better soon.. Sounds like a pain of a sickness you're going through right about now.. Hmmm.. Good chapter.

The two of them are always just aww like in the end.. Hmm.. Wondering what will be next. Good chapter(s).

Ive missed you so much! Not just your story, but you! How is everything?

Holy crap! An update! my day has been madee.

Waiting patiently is harder than it sounds.

And yes, I am still being patient, I'm just reminding you of how patient I am being. Waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting. I think that's a lot of waiting.

Anyyywayyy, you got my point. :)

Awwww!!! Aurore makes Severus so happy! And Molly is so sweet!!! This was a cute chapter! ^^

hmmm a language barrier has never been so cute!