A Better Man - Comments

Currently on chapter 5 and am loving this so far. I can just imagine Snape and his cloak! Will definitely be subscribing :) x

So maybe she'll meet Harry and all of them or something? Idk. Hmmm.. Title ideas.. That depends on what else you've been thinking.. Maybe something like: the blood covered prince? Half a prince? The prince? Prince in the blood? I don't know.. Maybe something else entirely? Anyways, good chapter.

I’m not a big fan of Harry Potter, so honestly this story wasn’t that appealing to me. But I like your layout, it’s simple and easy to read and it goes well with the theme of the story. The summary drew me right into the story and left me wanting more. I didn’t find many errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation so that’s good. The story flows very nicely and overall it’s an awesome story, just not inmy choice of stories. Keep writing, it’s worth reading!

Comment swap sent me here once again! I guess I shall comment once more, I figure. Why not? I'm actually a bit of a fan of this. I'm not a craaaaaaaazy Harry Potter fan. (I actually hate Harry Potter) But the plot really seems promising for me to read the whole thing. The first chapter is actually really good but it seems a bit forced! The one thing I really like about this is that you don't have to really be into the whole fandom thing to actually read and understand it, cheers! Xx

Hahaha. I will be anxiously waiting whatever you have in store.

Depends on how this ends. But I'm thinking hell to the yeah on the sequel anyways. Hmm.. Wonder how things will go from here. Especially with the trial and everything. Good chapter.

A sequel would be magnificent although I want Aurore and Severus together, but hey a little heartbreak never hurt a story.

Aurore can be a bit confusing at times.. And then she makes sense again. So it's all good ^.^ wondering what you have planned for this. Good chapter. :3

Ahh.. Love the story so much. I absolutely love Severus. And the chance you give him to have a happy ending is beautiful.

AHH a harry potter FF! i was soo happy when this came into my comment swap thingy, i've never read one so this was a first for me! i liked the first chapter, and it flows really well. i liked the summary as well i think it gives a good introduction into the whole thing. it's relaly good so keep wriing!

I liked how the summary was a letter, it was the perfect introduction to the character, as well as why she was going to be in Hogwarts (Though I'm not sure why they would need a French teacher). But I thought it a bit redundant to post the same letter into the first chapter.

As well, the first "chapter" seemed a little weird, because the interaction between the student and teacher seemed a little forced, and it was really short as well. If I would have written it, I would have started with the professor on the train or just at Hogwarts, which was chapter three. That would have been something I would have started with.

Other than that, it seems like an interesting plot :]

Do I smell a love triangle or maybe square? Damn.. She's got game.. Hmmm.. Good chapter.

Comment swap sent me here. I never actually read the Harry Potter books, but I did watch all the movies. I like how your summary is a letter, that draws me into the story. The plot seems interesting and original. At first, it was hard to stay with the story, but later in the story things cleared up and it grabbed my attention. This is a good story, good luck with it. :)

Comment swap sent me here. I'm not really a huge fan of Harry Potter but the plot seems good. Good :))))))

Comment swap sent me here. I'm not a huge fan of Harry Potter, but the plot seems interesting. I'm also not too good with le French, but I know enough. I found the beginning was a bit choppy, but things got better really quickly. Nice job. ^_^

why do you do this to me? LOL ^^ can't wait for the next chapter! Sirius is so cute being all protective! ^^

so he comes because of Professor D and he has an evelope with him? this doesn't look like it's going to be all to well or something.. sorry I'm getting to tired to write a proper comment.. so sorry for spelling mistakes or general confusion over what this says.. yeah.. what was I about to say? oh well.. good chapter

Soo... comment swap brought me here and I find it a bit cunfusing.
First of all I'm not a big fan of Harry Potter and I don't really get along with it and second... LE FRENCH! It totally hits me off, cause the only sentence I know is french for "I don't speak french" xD

way to give a girl blue balls at severus and aurore's first sex scene :P lmaoooo jk

who is it???? OMG!!! I need to know soon!^^ thanks for the longer chapter!