You're doing fine Hun :) As long as you keep having fun writing it, than the readers will enjoy. I've been following them since their single came out, here in North America I think...
So that chapter is exactly what I do...all the time :) Loved it because the way you write the boys personalities, makes it seem realistic. Hahah and if I had a day with the boys...I think I would spend the day at a theme park :)
Again I love your new chapter and I think that maybe Tom was the most scared and if I could punk one of the Wanted I would punk Jay. Please update soon.