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  • Johnny_ACL

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    So tell me why there's not a chapter 11?
    March 7th, 2013 at 11:53am
  • Zen Molek

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    Even though it took so long I'm really glad you came back! I missed it and I loved this update! I hope that something eventually happens so that she can get her little sister back because its not fair she went through this. I'm glad she moved to London with Lou. They are so cute :)
    November 12th, 2012 at 07:32am
  • ashleyliz_x

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    great update love!
    I feel so bad for Payton - for her own grandparents to do that to her - its just terrible!
    It's so sweet how Lou is sticking by her though!
    Absolutely love it and cannot wait for more! :)
    November 12th, 2012 at 06:40am
  • keepthefaithxoxo

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    Okay, my feels for this is too much. Lovelovelove, so much. I can't wait for you to update (:
    September 2nd, 2012 at 11:31pm
  • restart-my-heart

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    I'm not a huge One Direction fan but I also don't dislike them. Your spelling and grammar is flawless as well as the story plot. It seems you had the entire story planned out from the beginning. The characters are very realistic. Overall the story was amazing, I'm very happy comment swap sent me here.
    August 30th, 2012 at 09:18pm
  • State Of Grace

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    Oh my god, tears, all over the place. No, oh my god why? I'm just going to go into this story and go kick their grandparents' asses and then hug them both and just oh my god, I'm so emotional right now, this was an amazing story! I loved itM
    July 9th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • saudade.

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    Okay, yeah. I'm kinda crying. My eyes are tearing up.

    Great sad chapter! It was really well written and you did a good job at conveying the emotions that everyone would have been feeling! I can't wait for more!
    July 8th, 2012 at 05:49pm
  • grl_lk_moi_320

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    that cannot be happening. *subscribe*
    July 8th, 2012 at 08:32am
  • SaruhMai

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    Oh my god aw why are they doing that they're so mean! Just when things were starting to be happy for her they had to go ruin it. UPDATE SOON!!
    May 29th, 2012 at 09:43am
  • SaruhMai

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    Oh my god aw why are they doing that they're so mean! Just when things were starting to be happy for her they had to go ruin it. UPDATE SOON!!
    May 29th, 2012 at 09:43am
  • keepthefaithxoxo

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    just, asdfghjkl; WHY GRANDPARENTS WHY. This is too perfect. I need more!
    May 28th, 2012 at 11:28pm
  • keepthefaithxoxo

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    just, asdfghjkl; WHY GRANDPARENTS WHY. This is too perfect. I need more!
    May 28th, 2012 at 11:28pm
  • saudade.

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    I loved this! Great job! Mr. Green
    May 28th, 2012 at 02:01pm
  • Zen Molek

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    ahhh Louis and Payton are soooooo cute!
    but ugh, I hope that they let her keep kennedy!
    it's not fair :(
    May 28th, 2012 at 12:47pm
  • DevilInWhite

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    I hope she gets to keep custody of Kennedy!
    May 28th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • Zen Molek

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    just finished reading this. so cute! hope you update soon :)
    May 27th, 2012 at 03:41am
  • SaruhMai

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    Aw omfg they're so precious I love this story :3
    May 22nd, 2012 at 01:37am
  • saudade.

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    Such a great update! ONe that I waited for! Haaha. Thanks so much for the shoutout at the end, lovely!
    May 21st, 2012 at 12:36pm
  • saudade.

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    I'm loving this! Can't wait to see what's next!
    May 20th, 2012 at 05:04pm
  • keepthefaithxoxo

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    just, asdfghjkl; This is just to perf for me to handle. Katie, you are amazing (: I can't wait for more!
    May 11th, 2012 at 07:40am
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