The Story Left Untold - Comments

So tell me why there's not a chapter 11?

Even though it took so long I'm really glad you came back! I missed it and I loved this update! I hope that something eventually happens so that she can get her little sister back because its not fair she went through this. I'm glad she moved to London with Lou. They are so cute :)

great update love!
I feel so bad for Payton - for her own grandparents to do that to her - its just terrible!
It's so sweet how Lou is sticking by her though!
Absolutely love it and cannot wait for more! :)

Okay, my feels for this is too much. Lovelovelove, so much. I can't wait for you to update (:

I'm not a huge One Direction fan but I also don't dislike them. Your spelling and grammar is flawless as well as the story plot. It seems you had the entire story planned out from the beginning. The characters are very realistic. Overall the story was amazing, I'm very happy comment swap sent me here.

Oh my god, tears, all over the place. No, oh my god why? I'm just going to go into this story and go kick their grandparents' asses and then hug them both and just oh my god, I'm so emotional right now, this was an amazing story! I loved itM

Okay, yeah. I'm kinda crying. My eyes are tearing up.

Great sad chapter! It was really well written and you did a good job at conveying the emotions that everyone would have been feeling! I can't wait for more!

that cannot be happening. *subscribe*

Oh my god aw why are they doing that they're so mean! Just when things were starting to be happy for her they had to go ruin it. UPDATE SOON!!

Oh my god aw why are they doing that they're so mean! Just when things were starting to be happy for her they had to go ruin it. UPDATE SOON!!

just, asdfghjkl; WHY GRANDPARENTS WHY. This is too perfect. I need more!

just, asdfghjkl; WHY GRANDPARENTS WHY. This is too perfect. I need more!

I loved this! Great job!

ahhh Louis and Payton are soooooo cute!
but ugh, I hope that they let her keep kennedy!
it's not fair :(

I hope she gets to keep custody of Kennedy!

just finished reading this. so cute! hope you update soon :)

Aw omfg they're so precious I love this story :3

Such a great update! ONe that I waited for! Haaha. Thanks so much for the shoutout at the end, lovely!

I'm loving this! Can't wait to see what's next!

just, asdfghjkl; This is just to perf for me to handle. Katie, you are amazing (: I can't wait for more!