Control - Comments

I already read this and commented, what?

Must have been ages ago, I don't even remember. Seriously. i just read it as if I'd never read it before and my mind is blown and it was amazing. And I feel insanely stupid for like..commenting twice and shit, but I'm glad I read it again because this story is just perfect.
Brian being so full of himself and stubborn...it just...wow. I have no words, just know that this is fucking incredible, okay? Just like you.

Briaaaaaaaaaaan sem controle? Uau!

@ zoey anderson
I definitely wasn't trying to make him a bad guy. I know he's not, but that's just how it played out in my head. I have other stories of him where he's not a douche.

Im keeping it short. Fuck the story and the sequel. U guys make syn a bad person. Jesus fucking christ GET IT RIGHT!!!!

-foREVer</3

I love this! :D

I really like the way you describe Brian in this, his character. It's a bit different to what I usually read. And I honestly wasn't expecting her to be that way. I actually thought she was already going to just jump on Brian when she was at his place looking for her purse. xD Then there was a nice twist in the story, correcting my thoughts. I love the plot, because I just wasn't expecting any of it. Except for that they were going to fuck..I was indeed expecting that. xD

well since mibba fucked up and deleted everything posted within a few days, i shall re-comment!
wow, brian giving up his control? i didn't think that was possible haha. i thought it was going to be the girl, you made her all like shy and innocent and then BAM she is like demanding brian to get on his hands and knees and crawl to her, nicely done. he obviously wanted her badly. i am fully excited to read him controlling her, no doubt she'll be in for a world of submissive with him. this was smoking hot :D