Memories remain as time goes on - Comments

I'm from the Comment Swap. I love Avenged stories! First off, I will mention that there are some things are worded very strange, they still make sense but they just seem a little off. For example, the first sentence is "As I sighed with relief I opened my car door." It still makes sense but it sounds little backwards.

The biggest thing you'll want to watch is punctuation and grammar, it's definitely not the worst but it could use some improvement. Just keep a closer eye on it and you'll be golden! That being said, I really do like this story especially the fact that you incorporated something unique with the baseball game. I hope you continue!

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When I saw that this was an Avenged Sevenfold story, I couldn't help but groan as I don't really listen to them, and I don't know a lot about them so im not going to lie when I say that this wasn't exactly my cup of tea.

I will be objective though. I like the way that your characters met each other, it's not a way that's been seen in fics before, usually it's at a High School or a concert, so this was a nice change.

I did spot quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes, so would advise you to double check before posting but other than that, I think you did a good job on it

Omg that was some party crasher. I cant wait for the next chapter. I absolutely love your story. I love how you got them together and I love the way its going right now. Please continue on this story. I'm totally in love with it.

Hiya, Comment swap here. I don't know anything or I have never heard Avenged Sevenhold which is why I may of not enjoyed it as others would of. I did like the start of your story though and I liked that you bonded her with her dad through baseball. Overall, if I maybe knew the band I would of enjoyed it a little more but overall it was good!

Hi there! I honestly know nothing about Avenged Sevenfold and I am a comment swapper (sorry if I am offending you). I really liked the start of the story what with happened to her family and baseball. It was a strong start to this story! I wish you luck on your story's success!

~Amanda

This chapter is so cute. Cant wait for the next chapter.

This story is so cool. Keep going. Im in love with it.

well done i love it.