Is this just a one-shot? If so, I'll be dissapointed, I really like it. If it isn't a one-shot update when you can because I'm subscribing.
March 27th, 2008 at 04:17pm
That ending killed.
I can't find the word to describe it, but it's like, "Oh." What Brendon had been trying to prevent from happening the entire time ends up happening anyways so he can't...not that he can't protect Dru, but that it almost doesn't matter either way.
My favorite lines:
Oh, what was that word her mother had used? Manic. She was manic.
He didn’t want to kiss back, didn’t want to feel her body under his, not when it was the mania.
waiting to cut their feet and laugh at the blood.
Five minutes on hold, fifteen minutes of arguing with the secretary, three words scribbled on the calendar when it was all done.
