Make My Dream a Reality - Comments

  • Evil Falcon of Doom

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    This is very nice and well written, not something I'd normally read and I admit scanning threw a little (brought here by comment swap)

    But what I saw looked great.

    Only thing i can suggest is the layout. The black words going over various shades of grey isn't easy to see. you might try to adjust your background picture so it's more to the side and slim down the content box and move it so it's not overlapping the pic so that the words are easily readable. :}

    Good luck with your work. :}
    March 26th, 2013 at 02:55am
  • william.

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    This was a good story, not really one I would read over, though. Not trying to discourage you or anything, it just isn't my cup of tea to be honest. It was well written though, the concept just wasn't something I normally read.

    -Greg.
    June 5th, 2012 at 04:42am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    LOVED IT! I cannot wait for the sequel
    May 1st, 2012 at 05:33pm
  • ashleyliz_x

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    okay that last chapter was perfect! so happy she said yes! definitely looking forward to the sequel!
    May 1st, 2012 at 05:09am
  • ashleyliz_x

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    oops chapter 35 but it looks like you posted it already xD
    May 1st, 2012 at 05:06am
  • ashleyliz_x

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    please tell me you're going to post chapter 34 tonight!!! i cannot wait for him to propose!!!!! and i cannot wait for the sequel!!! :D please update soon!
    May 1st, 2012 at 05:06am
  • ashleyliz_x

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    they are seriously too adorable! i love it! cannot wait for the next chapter ! i know the sequel is going to be as amazing as this! :D can't wait for him to propose :)
    April 25th, 2012 at 04:47pm
  • FLSweet82

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    just found your story and cant wait for more, i like it
    April 20th, 2012 at 05:42pm