March 26th, 2013 at 02:55am
This was a good story, not really one I would read over, though. Not trying to discourage you or anything, it just isn't my cup of tea to be honest. It was well written though, the concept just wasn't something I normally read.
-Greg.
But what I saw looked great.
Only thing i can suggest is the layout. The black words going over various shades of grey isn't easy to see. you might try to adjust your background picture so it's more to the side and slim down the content box and move it so it's not overlapping the pic so that the words are easily readable. :}
Good luck with your work. :}