Five Minutes To Midnight - Comments

NobodyCares (100)

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Age:: 29
Location:: Norway

This story is so cute and really well written. I love it!

May 5th, 2013 at 12:13pm

Arabella- (105)

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Age:: 27
Location:: United States

Ugh, this was just so adorable and amazingly written and I just love it! Not to mention that I also love the song Five Minutes To Midnight and just everything about this is perfect.

October 9th, 2012 at 11:05pm

amour maigre (100)

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Age:: 27
Location:: United States

This is so cute!!!

August 12th, 2012 at 04:31pm

bellamy blake (3280)

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Age:: 33
Location:: United States

I’m not familiar with this fandom, and because of that, I didn’t feel like I was able to get a grasp on any of the male characters because there wasn’t enough description for me to visualize them in my head. The beginning of this also kind of read like an info dump, and the descriptions surrounding Fallon made my mind automatically jump to viewing her as a Mary Sue. This was cute, but there wasn’t really a balance between narration and dialogue and the transitions weren’t smooth.

June 10th, 2012 at 04:48am