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  • MasterOfDisaster

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    Update. Like now, like right now. Not later. Now. Do it. :) Excellent story!
    September 1st, 2012 at 07:49am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Wow! Amazing!!
    Update soon please!!
    August 28th, 2012 at 02:36pm
  • SQEE

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    Ahhh-mazing! Keep em coming!
    August 28th, 2012 at 01:40pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Loving this story so far!
    Shadows needs to calm down...She wasn't gonna run...Or was she?
    Update soon please!!
    August 24th, 2012 at 12:01am
  • Marinesister92

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    I never saw her boyfriend buying girls like that i was expecting him to run an actual gang that was doing something like selling of girls not buying and using. Then to have her try and escape i thought she was just going to look around and try and escape later, you've got me on my toes when reading this. I love it.
    -S
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:39pm
  • owlsongs1989

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    Fuck yeah... This is the most realistic way to describe Shads vocab. that's awesome. Love this story and please update soon :D
    July 4th, 2012 at 05:02am
  • kultaseni

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    Dun dun dun dun dunnnanananananana!
    I can't wait to see Matt in the upcoming chapter! Why was she kidnapped?! TELL ME YOUR SECRETS! :3
    May 3rd, 2012 at 06:09pm
  • TurtleJustice

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    I'm excited, this is great!
    i wish i could write like that, all my stuff is dull and lacks emotions.
    update soon! :D
    April 20th, 2012 at 03:34am
  • kultaseni

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    You've got a good start to the story. I can't wait to see where you take it! By the way...is her name Valen or Halen? Great start to what will hopefully be a great story!
    April 19th, 2012 at 03:59pm
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