It seems as if sex is all he's after, he should be much more loving and emotional than that, how dare he think he can in no time just have sex with her, without talking, mending things. After this, you should make him be really lovely and caring to her rather than this stupid cocky Gerard, he needs a taste of his own medicine!! Ooh you should have October date the guy (was it their security guard?) that she met at the concert, just so we can see Gerard annoyed and finally prove his love to her xx
Well... that's interesting. I'm really glad she didn't fuck him. Then I'd be pissed at her too. Buf, Gererard is even more of a dick because he tried to fuck her with the guys and her BABY in the other room. Like, who does that?
I'm proud of her honestly. She's not giving in, but.. but he's clean now.. and I wanna cry because she won't give me a little tiny chance to prove himself. I know he said he didn't want them.. and he was doing tons of drugs and stuff.. but how can you say no to that beautiful face? Even after two years.. :'3 But I was so excited for this chapter and I'm even more excited for the next!! I wanna know how the "hanging out" with Frank and Gerard goes.. even though Gerard invited himself! xD You always have perfect updates and I love you for that!! :D Btw, this one was awesomely long, which is amazing!! <3 :D
Oh my goodness. You had me on the edge of my seat that entire update with my hand clutching my chest. That was certainly intense. I don't even know how to handle all of that. I know it's selfish, but I would die of happiness if you updated again today. This story has got me going berzerk (sp?) wanting to know what's going to happen between them. I don't want Busy to find out he's her dad, but at the same time I do. SO MUCH CONFLICTION, GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Keep rocking, this story is fabulous. XOXO - Sofija.
It just had to be Gerard, who else's hand would seem so 'familiar' to her. Awww I loved how he followed her and left his phone just to see her again, aww something tells me this time he's not going to give up till he gets what he wants most. Love it , please update soon xxx
OMG I AM SO HYPED UP, I NEED MORE, JUST ONE MORE UPDATE PLEASE, YOU'VE GOT ME ON A STRING GIRL. GERARD...YOU IMBECILE. I HATE ELIZA, I HATE HER. I LOVE FRANK. BUT MIKEY AND GERARD ARE PRICKS, THEY DON'T DESERVE OCTOBER OR BUSY,
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET IT BE GERARD'S AMG. I'm dying. I just...please get them back together. It's all I've ever wanted. STOP MAKING GERARD LEAVE GODDAMMIT. And if perhaps they don't get back together, I'll settle with Frank c:
Busy is so adorable. I love the way you wrote her! And this whole chapter had me on my toes, you can't leave me with so little Gerard and a cliff hanger!!!
OMG I NEED TO KNOW WHOSE HAND IT WAS!! You make me so happy, but then you leave me on a cliffhanger!! D: Ah, it's okay though 'cause I really hope the next update is soon!! I felt so nervous throughout this whole chapter, which was amazingly long, btw! I loved it!! SOO excited for the next chapter!! I'm gonna check my email every hour! xD
Busy is just so freakin' CUTE!! I'm soo excited for her to meet Gerard, but that girl must go! I don't even know who she is yet, but I can already tell there will be drama and lots of it!!! :P And just to know that he went clean for some girl he met instead of the women he has so much history with is just crazy. I hope he doesn't hurt her again if they get back together! :3