Comment swap brought me here. I'm not of big fan of slash but I thought this was really great. I liked how Andy just said he was in a relationship with Oliver in the first chapter. I think I'll recommended it. :)
I came here from comment swap and have to say that I am not a fan of boysex. It is not because I'm homophobic, but sex just weirds me out period. The story was still readable which is better than most and the layout was decent. Continue to do what makes you happy. :)
I have to comment you again because it finished the story now or well the last chapter you wrote and I do have to say that is verra great, you should kept writing because it is interesting and enjoyable. I'm reaaally expecting for more. I don't talk about mistakes because I have to say that I'm guilty as well xD. But well keep writing I will be expecting for more. TA-TA! and sorry I left so many comments behind :p
I was so excited to see this fan fiction pop up on my screen! I love Bring Me The Horizon! This story was extremely detailed and I admire that. You are a true fangirl. ;) I encourage you to go back and fix the grammar errors. Also, I think you should continue writing for this. It has great potential! :)